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In Hiding and In Love

by mormoriarty17

ao3:760428 · 1,495 words

Teen F/M

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Summary

Another creative writing prompt:

Rewrite the story where the blind woman goes to her new boyfriend’s apartment, but this time write it from the boyfriend’s point of view. The boyfriend is not blind, so you can use visual details. But don’t forget about the other senses. The apartment belongs to him, so although he can see it, he is not paying attention to the details in the same way that the woman is. It is all familiar to him. On the other hand, he is paying attention to her. He is attracted to her physically and notices details about how she looks. Make the reader see these details. Also: as the blind woman begins to suspect that he’s married, he notices a change in her behavior. He is watching her reactions closely, so show the reader what he sees.

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  • Fraying at the Edges
  • Fraying at the Edges [2]

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